Thursday, August 8, 2013

Anthea Carson talks about suspense

Meet Anthea... she's my guest blogger today and she's talking about suspense!! Be sure to check out our interview over at BlogTalkRadio Friday August 16th, at 5:30 PM -- here -- http://www.blogtalkradio.com/writergroupie
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I have always enjoyed the process writing of a good suspense, especially psychological suspense.

Like humor, the craft of suspense has a whole lot to do with timing. First you plant clues that something may go wrong. You can do this very subtly. Just having an odd item in a room can foretell evil happenings.

As with dream-logic, juxtaposing two things in time will create a story-logic connection.

In a simple murder or horror suspense, the leaving of clues and the signs that evil is coming is fairly straightforward. Plant a knife in the scene somewhere, bring it out a few scenes later.

With psychological suspense I plant clues by showing how out of touch with reality my main character is.



For example, in The Dark Lake, book 1 in The Oshkosh Trilogy, I show that the main character is out of touch. She starts her new job. She arrives late, and then tells them that she is thirsty and needs a soda. When they point to the drinking fountain she tells them that their water tastes like pipes. Then she goes out to her car and digs around for the 35 cents to get the pop.

Her lack of connectedness to reality makes many readers want to keep her safe, since they know she can’t keep herself safe. This creates uneasy anticipation, the very definition of suspense.



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Something is wrong with Jane.

It's not that she still lives with her parents in Oshkosh, Wisconsin, although she's well into her thirties. It's not that she can't keep a job, stay sober, or function as an independent adult. It's something else. Something she can't quite remember.

There was a party. And a car. And the lake.

Sunday, August 4, 2013

Book Review for CRESCENDO by Deborah Ledford


Crescendo, book three in the Steven Hawk/Inola Walela psychological suspense thriller series, follows in the fast-paced and mesmerizing tradition of Staccato and Snare, the first and second books in the series.

I’m not going to rehash the plot here, because there are already a plethora of summaries in reviews previously posted. What I do enjoy writing about, however, is the reaction I have to novels, and how the characters or plot affected me personally. I know, it’s a bit narcissistic, but those are the types of reviews I like to read, not just plot rehashes. ;o)

Since I read the first book in the series, Staccato, I’ve loved the character Inola, a Native American cop who’s constantly having to prove herself to her police department colleagues in the relatively backwoods town of the Bryson City, North Carolina. In spite of her stubborn nature, her inability to communicate with those she truly loves (Steven and her grandmother, Elisi), and her insistence on going out on her own despite obvious dangers that threaten – you can’t help but love her. Tough, focused, and smart, she’s everything you’d want in a heroine.

I particularly enjoyed her vulnerability in this book re. the evil villain’s charms. When she is told her bullet most likely killed her best friend and partner, Cody, she is understandably traumatized. She’s removed from her job, believes she is responsible for Cody’s death, and is obsessed over the mention of a missing child at the scene of the accident that opens the story. These three items weaken her confidence and resolve, and she’s inexplicably drawn to a fellow sympathetic listener, Preston, who happens to be a delicious villain. Preston—a wonderful actor—charms her into his arms. Problem is, Inola’s currently living with and involved in a relationship with the rugged black Sheriff, Steven Hawk.

There were many memorable scenes, including Inola’s visit to the villain’s hotel room, the shivery cold chase scenes through the woods, and the amusing scenes with the IT jailbird who is released to help out the cops. My favorites, however, were those showcasing Inola’s grandmother Elisi and the young abandoned boy they rescue from a hotel room. Her loving attention to this boy broke my heart, and I felt instantly moved. Although it seems Elisi didn’t connect with Inola when she was delivered to her to be raised, she apparently has grown and changed over time, and has a great deal of love to share.

I have recently learned that Ms. Ledford is planning a fourth book in the series – hurray!

Recommended by Aaron Paul Lazar, www.lazarbooks.com.

Title:  Crescendo
Author:  Deborah Ledford
Publisher: Second Wind Publishing
Genre: Thriller
Kindle eBook: $4.99
ASIN: B00BHJC9O8
Trade Paperback: $14.36
ISBN-10: 1938101340
ISBN-13: 978-1938101342
Author’s website: deborahjledford.com


Here's a bit about the author, Deborah Ledford:



Deborah J Ledford’s latest novel, CRESCENDO, is book three of the Steven Hawk/Inola Walela thriller series from Second Wind Publishing. Other novels include: SNARE—The Hillerman Sky Award Finalist and the NM-AZ Book Awards Finalist, and the classical music-themedSTACCATO. Part Eastern Band Cherokee, she spent her summers growing up in the Great Smoky Mountains western North Carolina where her novels and quite a few of her literary and short stories are set.
Three-time nominee for the Pushcart Prize, Deborah’s award-winning short stories appear in numerous print publications as well as literary and mystery anthologies. She is also a professional content editor and is most proud to be Lead Editor of three award-winning Sisters in Crime Desert Sleuths Chapter (AZ) anthologies.
She lives in Scottsdale, AZ, is pack leader of two awesome Aussie Shepherd boys and one extremely patient husband. Currently working on a new suspense thriller series, the screenplay for SNARE, and launching audiobook versions of the Steven Hawk/Inola Walela thriller trilogy which will benefit the advancement of Native American language and culture. 

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Reviewed by Aaron Lazar, copyright, 2013

Twilight Times Books by multi-award winning author, Aaron Lazar:

DOUBLE FORTÉ (print, eBook, audio book)
UPSTAGED (print, eBook, audio book)  
MAZURKA (print, eBook, audio book)
FIRESONG (print, eBook, audio book)
VIRTUOSO (~2014)

HEALEY'S CAVE (print, eBook, audio book)
FOR KEEPS (print, eBook, audio book)

FOR THE BIRDS (print, eBook, audio book)
ESSENTIALLY YOURS (print, eBook, audio book)
MURDER ON THE SACANDAGA (~2014)

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WRITE LIKE THE WIND, volumes 1, 2, 3 (ebooks and audio books)

Aaron Paul Lazar writes to soothe his soul. An award-winning, bestselling Kindle author of three addictive mystery series, Aaron enjoys the Genesee Valley countryside in upstate New York, where his characters embrace life, play with their dogs and grandkids, grow sumptuous gardens, and chase bad guys. Visit his website at http://www.lazarbooks.com and watch for his upcoming Twilight Times Books releases DON’T LET THE WIND CATCH YOU (2013), SANCTUARY (2014), and VIRTUOSO (2014).

Friday, August 2, 2013

Review of Innovative Online Tours - by Christine Amsden



Hello, folks!

In our continuing series from author Christine Amsden, today we feature another review of an online book tour company. Thanks again to Christine for providing us with this valuable information!

Aaron Paul Lazar

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copyright 2013 Christine Amsden

I made the decision to hire Innovative Online Tours about a month and a half before the release of my latest novel, Cassie Scot:
ParaNormal Detective. I had already signed up with Pump Up Your Book but was feeling a bit nervous about the number of reviews I was getting through the bigger tour. Ultimately, I think I was right to feel a little nervous about that, although the PUYB tour did do well for me. (See their review.)

Reviews are critical. Big reviews. Little reviews. Blog review. Goodreads review. Amazon reviews. Barnes and Noble reviews aren’t bad, although that company has not properly established its potential role in the world of on-line product reviews (much to their detriment, but that’s their bigwigs’ concern, not mine).

What is the #1 reason that people buy books? Because someone recommended it to them. What is the #2 reason people buy books? Because a great many people recommended it to them so they can’t seem to get away from the thing! You want your readers thinking, “All right already! I get the point. I should read this book!”

For that reason, reviews are a huge part of any blog tour. I won’t go so far as to say book tours without reviews aren’t useful, but reviews go one extra step — they aren’t just putting the book in the reader’s face. They’re putting it in the reader’s face with the unbiased addendum, “And this was awesome! You SO need to get this book!” (Doesn’t work so well coming from the author. :) )

Of course, you have to have written a really good book. And then you have to believe in yourself. I know from experience that these are at least equally difficult tasks.

So on to Innovative Online Tours…

I was worried that I wasn’t getting enough reviews so I started searching specifically for places that would help me distribute my book for review. I wasn’t going to pay directly for reviews. (Oh never do this! It’s a scam and a half. Can you say conflict of interests? I knew you could!) Going through an online tour service to get a book review works because you’re not paying for the review. You’re paying for someone to help you find people who are willing to review the book. The reviewers themselves only get a copy of the book, which is appropriate.

Innovative Online Tours doesn’t even promise good reviews. They warn you right up front that they will not attempt to control what their reviewers say about your book.
Ohhhh, self confidence… don’t fail me now!


Price

Innovative Online Tours are extremely inexpensive. I paid $75 for their 10-stop release-day review blitz. All of their packages are inexpensive, and they seem to specialize in single-day events… blitzes, cover reveals, etc. They do have weeks-long tours for reasonable rates as well, but there is a certain magic that can happen when you flood the Internet all at once. It’s called getting those volatile amazon sales ranks low enough that amazon itself starts plugging for your book.

Value

There’s inexpensive and then there’s cheap. You know what I’m talking about. :) I consider Innovative Online Tours to be inexpensive. Granted, their tour hosts aren’t the biggest blogging fish on the Internet, but they deliver reviews. On May 15 (release day), I got not 10 but 12 review stops (more on that later) and all reviews went up on amazon.com, swelling my numbers there. Most of them went on goodreads as well. My amazon sales rank bottomed out as dozens of people bought the book on the exact same day. I can’t say it will work as well for anyone else — there is a lot more to a successful book sale recipe than any single tour — but I do believe that for $7.50 per review stop, this is a value.

Look and Feel

My banner is up top and it’s nice if simple. I didn’t expect a lot from the tour banner for &75, to be honest. But if I have one complaint about the company, it’s not the banner so much as the fact that the banner no longer has a home to link to. They have their current banners listed on their front page but only a handful of older tours all listed together on the same page. You do not get a personalized tour page with a list of stops. Since I run my own web page I know how easy and inexpensive a feature this is so I find it disappointing that IO Tours didn’t offer this standard, especially during the tour. Most of the virtual book tour services I have worked with continue to list my tour stops even after it’s all said and done.

Professionalism and Communication

IO Book Tours responded promptly and professionally to every inquiry I made of them. They provided their service as promised and on time. This was one of the smoothest running tours I did with the fewest hiccups. They even went the extra step of allowing 2 extra stops for no additional charge when more reviewers showed an interest in my book.

Bottom Line


I highly recommend IO Book Tours.



About the Author


Christine Amsden has been writing science fiction and fantasy for as long as she can remember. She loves to write and it is her dream that others will be inspired by this love and by her stories. Speculative fiction is fun, magical, and imaginative but great speculative fiction is about real people defining themselves through extraordinary situations. Christine writes primarily about people and it is in this way that she strives to make science fiction and fantasy meaningful for everyone.

At the age of 16, Christine was diagnosed with Stargardt’s Disease, a condition that effects the retina and causes a loss of central vision. She is now legally blind, but has not let this slow her down or get in the way of her dreams. (You can learn more here.)

In addition to writing, Christine teaches workshops on writing at Savvy Authors. She also does some freelance editing work.

Christine currently lives in the Kansas City area with her husband, Austin, who has been her biggest fan and the key to her success. They have two beautiful children, Drake and Celeste.

Friday, July 26, 2013

How to Hire a Virtual Tour Service by Christine Amsden

copyright 2013, Christine Amsden

Why should I plan a virtual book tour for my book?


I’ll start with the easiest question to answer… You should plan a virtual book tour for your book because the Internet is how books are sold. Even if people end up going to a brick and mortar store (and most don’t bother), they find out about books online. Readers are on social media. They’re on Goodreads. They visit their favorite review blogs.
In-person appearances have their place, but they tend to be more effective once you’ve developed a name and reputation. Or if you have some kind of expertise that makes you attractive to those seeking public speakers. The most effective in-person events are only peripherally about your book. Book signings, unless you have a following, are more of a direct public appeal to whoever happens to be in the bookstore that day. Maybe you’re a good salesman and you even manage to sell a few copies. I sold an average of six books every time I did a two-hour book signing event during a high-traffic time. The trouble was, each of those sales was stand-alone. It didn’t grow my brand or the book’s brand.
Books are most commonly sold by word of mouth. The key is to get the right words into the right mouths. Random customer in a bookstore may buy your book, but is unlikely to be the person to influence twenty other sales. So who is?
Thanks to the Internet, anyone can review books these days and many of them do. I’m a book reviewer myself, currently in the top 1% of reviewers on Goodreads. I have hundreds of followers so when I recommend a book, I usually see at least a few people clicking “to read.” And it is just as easy as that on sites like Goodreads – that looks good, I’ll list it “to read.” Getting them to actually buy the book is the next step. Often people need to see the same book from several different sources before they take the real plunge.
Big reviewers such as the New York Times and Publisher’s Weekly still have a solid place in the book world, but mainly that place is to establish credibility. With millions of self-published books coming out every year, there are more books released in a day than many will read in a lifetime. The fact that a “big name” reviewer gave a book the time of day lends some legitimacy to it that can definitely help. It helped me a ton to get a Publisher’s Weekly review for Cassie Scot, which is why I proudly quote it on the front page of my website. But Publisher’s Weekly was only the first step. And thanks to a widespread network of reviewers on the Internet, if that step had never come about, it wouldn’t have been game over.
The Internet sells books. Social media sells books. Book bloggers sell books.
So why should you plan a virtual book tour? Because you want to sell books.
Can’t I just plan a tour myself?
I don’t know, can you? You can certainly try. It never hurts to approach bloggers personally, especially if you have any kind of relationship with that blogger.
But let’s face it: You’re a busy author. You’ve got sequels to write, probably a day job to pay the actual bills, and you can’t spend 24 hours a day on the Internet forming personal relationships with everyone who might help you sell your book. And heck, even if you did it might not work. Where’s your “in?” After you’ve done a few tours and have a running list of reviewers who have left glowing reviews or your book, you may be able to do things differently. But for now…
You have to invest something in your book. It is not free to publish a book, whatever you’ve been led to believe. And I’m not just talking to self-published authors here. Traditional publishing advice often quotes the “money flows to the author” line. The advice makes sense to a point. You certainly don’t pay your publisher to publish a book or else you’ve stumbled upon a vanity press. But if you think your publisher is going to handle all the marketing for you while you sit back and write your next book, you’re in for a rude awakening.
However you publish a book, you have to promote it. Bottom line. The biggest monetary advantage you get by going big press is a small (for first-time authors a few thousand dollars) advance that you can reinvest in your marketing campaign.
There are some ways to use time in lieu of money as an investment tool, but personally I think you need both. There isn’t a 1:1 exchange rate between time and money. There are some aspects of marketing that money can’t buy – personal interaction with fans, for instance. And there are some aspects of marketing that time cannot buy – connections to top-tier bloggers, for example. (At least, not unless you’re living in an alternate dimension with more hours in a day than the typical human living in this dimension has available. If you’ve got a TARDIS, this article isn’t for you.)
I’ve spent countless hours on the Internet trying to personally contact bloggers. This was largely how I handled the marketing for my second novel, The Immortality Virus. (Touch of Fate, my first book, was my brick and mortar store lesson.) I sent e-mails to hundreds of bloggers requesting reviews and interviews. I created my own blog and updated it regularly. I got active on social media.
I’ll give the approach this much – it worked better than the brick and mortar store angle. But for every 100 bloggers I contacted directly, maybe 5 got back to me. I worked with a publicist early on to get me 20 reviews and interviews, which helped. If I had been starting from scratch, I’m not sure I would have goten as much response as I did. I have no idea how many hundreds of reviewers I contacted directly. I had a bit of luck on a social networking site called “Book Bloggers” but this site has since been overrun by self-published authors trying to get attention for their work and the real reviewers have gone elsewhere. It’s a predictable pattern, but it makes it difficult for authors trying to get that free publicity. You have to stay ahead of the social media trends. This requires dedication, persistence, and intuition. I can’t tell you which sites to visit. Next month or next year, all the information will be out of date.
So why should you hire a service to help you with a virtual book tour? Because those services have access to bloggers that you don’t have and that no amount of time or effort will get you.
Millions of new books each year. No exaggeration. If you want in that game you’ve got to be a serious player. The good news is that most of those millions of new books, largely put out by self-published authors, aren’t serious at all. That give syou an edge.
How much money are we talking about here?
How much you got? You can spend as much money as you can imagine. You can pay for publicists and advertising as well as virtual tours. You can buy more expensive tours or cheaper tours.
Parting with money is tough and I’m not trying to scam you out of anything. I’ve got nothing invested in you or your money. I’m not running a PR service! I’m telling you that I think if you’re serious, you may want to hire a PR service. Today I’m telling you why. Next week I’m going to start seriously reviewing some of the many virtual tour services I’ve personally done business with. I have no relationship with any of them other than as a customer and I’m planning to write reviews because I see a genuine need for such information. I will be as fair and thorough as possible in my reviews.
Whatever you do, don’t invest more money than you can afford!!!!!
Your family comes first. The odds of you turning a profit on your book, even with the right marketing approach, are extremely slim. You’ll be lucky to break even. So make sure your priorities are straight. Feed your family. Don’t go into debt for this. Don’t mortgage your house. Don’t run up your credit card bill. (Please don’t run up your credit card bill! Talk about an insane fiscal decision.)
If that means you don’t have any money to invest in your book then so be it. This is a business. You have to treat it like a business. If you don’t have the money then you’ve got to figure out how to get it. Historically, the arts have often been supported by wealthy sponsors. These days we call those wealthy sponsors publishers and you can still approach them with your manuscripts. The top publishers even offer advances you can use to invest in your brand.
I’m not suggesting you do that. This article isn’t about traditional vs. self-publishing. I’m just covering bases here and urging you to understand one simple truth: Publishing isn’t free. Someone has to pay for it, whether that person is you or someone else. If you’ve accepted this truth, then you won’t publish a book unless you have the money.
I used a small traditional press without the resources to pay advances, although I do earn generous royalties on every book I sell. (And I don’t pay any up-front publishing costs.) To earn money for my marketing campaigns, I’ve started doing freelance editing work so I don’t have to dip into the family budget to cover my business expenses. That’s just one approach, but it has worked for me. I’ve earned several thousand dollars from my editing work that I have been able to re-invest into marketing, largely in the form of book tours. This is how I can bring you reviews of so many different services.
Next time: A review of Pump Up Your Book

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Author bio:

Award-winning author Christine Amsden has written stories since she was eight, always with a touch of the strange or unusual. She became a “serious” writer in 2003, after attending a boot camp with Orson Scott Card. She finished Touch of Fate shortly afterward, then penned The Immortality Virus, which won two awards. Expect many more titles by this up-and-coming author.


Check out Christine's newest release here:

Tuesday, July 23, 2013

My Indie Experience (So Far...) by Elle Bright

copyright 2013, Elle Bright

I am a new, independently published author. My first book, FALL OF DARKNESS, was released in e-book format via Kindle Direct Publishing earlier this month. The paperback will be available in the near future on Amazon and Createspace, as well as other distributors. I am often asked why I chose independent publishing over traditional. Though I remain unsure whether it was the right decision for me, there were several reasons why I pursued the independent route.

First, I wanted complete control over my book. It’s my story and I wanted to tell it my way, without interference from a third party. I wanted to break the rules and take chances. Second, my other writing friends were doing it, with remarkable results. They made it sound so easy. Well, I’ve learned a thing or two since then. Third, honestly, I was terrified of rejection. I’d heard the horror stories regarding the pursuit of a traditional publisher and I wanted no part of it. I thought I could buffer myself against the pain of rejection, if I put my work out there for the right audience to find it. Little did I know, the greatest challenge would be actually getting people to read it.

So, what do I know now that I wish I’d known then? The answer is, a lot. First off, independent publishing sounds easy. Go ahead and write a book, load it up, and send it out to the waiting masses. Yeah, right. If only it worked that way.  Here in the real world, self publishing is a lot of work. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. As with exercise, if it’s not hard, you’re probably not doing it right.

First off, formatting is a beast. I still haven’t mastered the format for the digital copy of my first e-book. There’s a steep learning curve, but there’s also a wonderful support system in the online forums. I will conquer the e-book. Once you’ve managed the e-book format, you have to create a separate one for the physical copy. Gutters are my worst nightmare. Even if you follow the instructions given, you will probably go through several proofs before your book is print-ready. Sure, you can pay someone else to format it for you, but most of us who are just starting out don’t have the budget.

I really enjoyed creating my cover. I have a basic knowledge of Photoshop and already had a specific design in mind. What I didn’t enjoy was the constant revamping and tweaking that followed. A word of advice, just because it looks gorgeous on your screen, doesn’t mean it will look good everywhere else. Color and light vary from screen to screen and can appear totally different in print. Get a physical copy before you publish.

Editing is one of the challenges that most writers tend to underestimate. I know I did. I have read my book so many times that I’m sick of it. I have edited and edited the thing to death. Yet, when I handed it over to my reviewers, it was still far from perfect. I made another round of edits based on their feedback, but my copy editor friend still found several corrections. All too often, we put our work out there without giving it proper review. Polish your words until they shine, then get more eyes to look at them. Readers often lose patience with a poorly edited story.

Marketing is another major hurdle for independent authors. I assumed that if I wrote a good story, people would find it and buy it. Little did I know, marketing requires quite a bit of time and effort. I used to consider Facebook a guilty pleasure and a major waste of time, now I consider it the marketing time vortex. I can sit in front of my computer for hours, interacting with readers and other writers, all the while promoting my work. There are so many amazing people in the writing community. I have reaped many benefits from the virtual support system and the wealth of knowledge out there. My marketing plan is still in progress, but I have noticed one particularly useful tool. Bloggers.

Make friends with bloggers who follow your genre. Guest posts, reviews, and promos on multiple blogs help to spread your reach over a larger readership, granting more exposure. Provide your bloggers with advanced reader copies (ARC’s) in exchange for honest reviews. It’s a great way to get your name out there. Reviews sell books. The more objective reviews you have, the more desirable your book will appear. Personally, I selected people I didn’t know to read and review my ARC’s, because I feared my family and friends might struggle with remaining objective. I feel this lends more credibility to my reviews. Words can’t express how amazing it feels to hear back from a perfect stranger who loved your work. They have no reason to sugar-coat it, so their praise is all the more valuable.

The independent publishing route is not for everyone. There are those who have found success, but many have not. I’m anxious to see which direction my writing takes. Regardless, I am proud to have my work out there. I have held a book that I wrote in my hands. I’ve basked in the warmth of glowing reviews. For me, there is no greater reward. Best of luck and warm regards.

- Elle Bright



Born and raised in Utah, Elle has since moved around with her husband's military career. She currently lives in San Diego, CA with her husband, three children, and their part human border collie.

She received her BSN from Grand Canyon University in Arizona. As a practicing Registered Nurse, she specializes in Pediatrics, Neonatal Intensive Care, and Emergency Medicine. When not working, writing, or parenting, she enjoys reading, running, singing, dancing, traveling, shopping, photography, Zumba, and digital scrapbooking. She is a proud member of the Romance Writers of America.



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