When a reader picks up your story, or opens the
cover of your masterpiece breakout novel, they truly want to like it. They want
to root for the characters, feel the setting, and be transported and
entertained. There is a sort of honeymoon period that you enter into with your
readers. It generally lasts for the first few paragraphs in a short story, and
the first few pages in a novel. Within that short honeymoon phase, you need to
answer the three questions all readers ask unconsciously as they advance
through the story.
1. Yeah?
So what?
Why should the reader care what’s
happening in the story? Why should I invest my time in your story and not go
turn on the television? I’ve seen this thing happen in books thousands of
times, so what makes this any different?
2. Really?
That isn’t the way things happen in
the real world. I don’t know anyone who would do something like that. How dumb
does this guy think we all are? This writer doesn’t have a clue…I’m done with
this story.
3. What?
What’s happening here? I have no
idea who’s talking to who, no idea what just happened. When did that happen?
Either this guy can’t write, or I can’t read. It doesn’t matter, this isn’t
worth my time.
Your job, as the teller of the tale, is to answer
the questions your readers have. When they say so what, you have to give them a
reason to care about the characters. When they ask really, what they need to
know is that the plot is feasible and makes sense, and persuades the readers to
suspend their belief system enough to allow your story to unfold. And when they
ask what, it’s your job to provide a clarity that allows them to follow the
dialogue and action to the next event in a way that propels the reader through
the story. The ability to answer these questions will allow you to make a great
first impression on your audience, and hold their attention as they trust you
to deliver the story you promised them.
Amen, Ron. You hit the nail on the head with these critical elements. I often ask my readers to accept that so much happens to my characters in their series, but when it happens it has to feel REAL. ;o) Thanks!
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