tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6001825743960552008.post152764210495092419..comments2024-03-27T18:06:04.484-04:00Comments on Murder by 4: Writers and Readers, I Need Your Help!Marta Stephenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14126647102399666578noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6001825743960552008.post-21753745628913411672013-07-09T05:50:12.958-04:002013-07-09T05:50:12.958-04:00Hi, Kim! Thanks for reading this. ;o) Libby is his...Hi, Kim! Thanks for reading this. ;o) Libby is his employer's daughter, and it is a little bit deliberate keeping her id somewhat uncertain in the beginning, there is a big reveal later about who she really is. ;o) Thank you!<br /><br />Gabby, glad to hear from you today. Thanks for stopping by. So nice to know this technique (while new to me) is certainly doable and can be enjoyed from a readers' perspective. Thank you and have a great day!<br />Aaron Paul Lazarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06117814221437165664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6001825743960552008.post-31526475487773940172013-07-09T03:56:50.311-04:002013-07-09T03:56:50.311-04:00I just finished Beneath Hallowed Ground by Steven ...I just finished Beneath Hallowed Ground by Steven P Locklin in which the technique was used that you've mentioned here. It worked very well in that book because it was used creatively, and by placing the breaks in time periods where he did, he made me want to keep going to find out what happened next in both time periods. It wasn't confusing at all, although I've seen that statement made about this technique before. I loved it and look forward to seeing what you do with your book.Gabbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777955016013267849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6001825743960552008.post-79989440681500920862013-07-08T06:36:07.695-04:002013-07-08T06:36:07.695-04:00oooh this one is going to be a goodie Aaron!!! I t...oooh this one is going to be a goodie Aaron!!! I think the going back in time will be necessary for us to get the full impact. Also, it was a little unclear who Libby was? Is she his sister? Neighbor? Maybe it is me... it's only 530 am!Kim Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13933746166088034102noreply@blogger.com